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| laaaaaaaame |
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| Name: jason | 2006-06-23 |
| damn that's lame |
| i dont like it |
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| Name: hahahahahah | 2006-11-23 |
| "I;am not a prt of it" i dont like it |
| It is respectable |
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| Name: Colette | 2006-12-21 |
| These vows are being repectable of two different cultures and not insulting each other of their differences. |
| okay |
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| Name: Alexis | 2007-01-16 |
| It's okay just the "I'm not part of it" line doesn't sit well with me. |
| just one thing |
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| Name: sara | 2007-03-01 |
| It is very nice, just the part about " I am not a part of it" seems a little distasteful. |
| it sucked |
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| Name: courtney | 2007-04-04 |
| saying that you are not a part of something and then getting married is contradicting yourself and well...i dont see this marriage lasting long...sorry hun.. |
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| Name: Rob | 2007-06-05 |
| riiiight. If that's as good as you can come up with, you must not care much. |
| It would be sad to hear this at a wedding |
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| Name: Miguel | 2007-07-25 |
| Get rid of the word "but". It's a celebration, not a differentiation. |
| Has potential Not too intimate |
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| Name: CDaye | 2007-11-26 |
The last two sentences sound upbeat and inspiring, although you trip a bit on the very last words. The "but I am not a part of it" in the beginning creates a psychological rift.
The overall effect,to me is that it is an instructional,defining boundaries for any relatives who are skeptical of the union. With a litte fine tuning it could fly.
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| Name: Jesco | 2007-12-15 |
| That's the gayest shit I've ever read. |
| respect |
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| Name: amanda | 2008-01-04 |
| i think he is so in love he is willing to back her up anyway |
| respect |
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| Name: amanda | 2008-01-04 |
| i think it needs more respect |
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