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As we make one of two Comments
| Reader Comments |
| as we make one of two |
| Name: sherrie | 2005-04-29 |
| this is beautiful thank you for sharing this!!! |
| as we make one of two |
| Name: Savannah | 2005-06-03 |
| it is beautiful, but long. |
| Dr Seuss wrote this |
| Name: George | 2007-07-06 |
| I do not like it Sam I am. I will not eat green eggs and ham. |
| woeful |
| Name: Renee | 2007-11-24 |
| well intentioned shite |
| together as one |
| Name: Morgan | 2007-10-13 |
| I think that this is absolutely beautiful. I got lost a few times when the rhythm seemed to break, but I love it! I think that I'd like to use this in my wedding. However, I would say relatively traditional vows and then say this together, as one, with my new husband! |
| As we make one of two |
| Name: Amy Lee | 2008-06-14 |
| Not a fan of this one. It reminds me of a poem I wrote for a boy I liked in Junior High. Way too many "ooh" words too. |
| You stupid cunt. |
| Name: To Amy Lee | 2008-09-03 |
If you dont like the poem, go fuck your self. You stinky fat (me love you long time) filthy stinky twat. You dont have to tear apart analyzing the fucking thig. Know it all Cunt !!!!
P.S.
God Bless |
| Wow |
| Name: Claudia | 2008-09-14 |
| This is truly, truly beautiful. |
| i dont think so |
| Name: Amy | 2008-09-16 |
| i agree with George... the whole rhyming thing makes a mockery of your solemn wedding vows... |
| absolutely beautiful |
| Name: Jen | 2008-10-31 |
| this is so beautiful, just perfect. |
| to long |
| Name: Rachel | 2009-03-01 |
| This would take forever |
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