Wedding Vows

As we make one of two Comments

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as we make one of two
Name: sherrie2005-04-29
this is beautiful thank you for sharing this!!!
as we make one of two
Name: Savannah2005-06-03
it is beautiful, but long.
Dr Seuss wrote this
Name: George2007-07-06
I do not like it Sam I am. I will not eat green eggs and ham.
woeful
Name: Renee2007-11-24
well intentioned shite
together as one
Name: Morgan2007-10-13
I think that this is absolutely beautiful. I got lost a few times when the rhythm seemed to break, but I love it! I think that I'd like to use this in my wedding. However, I would say relatively traditional vows and then say this together, as one, with my new husband!
As we make one of two
Name: Amy Lee2008-06-14
Not a fan of this one. It reminds me of a poem I wrote for a boy I liked in Junior High. Way too many "ooh" words too.
You stupid cunt.
Name: To Amy Lee2008-09-03
If you dont like the poem, go fuck your self. You stinky fat (me love you long time) filthy stinky twat. You dont have to tear apart analyzing the fucking thig. Know it all Cunt !!!!

P.S.
God Bless
Wow
Name: Claudia2008-09-14
This is truly, truly beautiful.
i dont think so
Name: Amy2008-09-16
i agree with George... the whole rhyming thing makes a mockery of your solemn wedding vows...
absolutely beautiful
Name: Jen2008-10-31
this is so beautiful, just perfect.
to long
Name: Rachel2009-03-01
This would take forever
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