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Let us make of our two lives, one life Comments
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| Name: Unicorn | 2006-12-04 |
| I like the beginning... the last line though.. meh. |
| yes |
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| Name: youngen | 2007-02-21 |
| i really liked this one, it was simple and to the point, not very 'goddy' which is what i was looking for, a definity maybe, however i agree with unicorn about the last line, could use some tweaking |
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| Name: joseph thomas | 2008-06-03 |
| What happend to the word LOVE ??? is'nt that what getting married is all about as well as honour and respect . |
| Hmmm |
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| Name: Mike Hunt | 2009-09-30 |
| i pooped my pants when i read this. |
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