Love It

Not many people want to sit there at a wedding for hours to hear two people being gooshy about how much they love each other! This one I would pick because its better than "Do you? Do you? Now lets party!" which is my original choice

Jamie Hancock 2011-10-23

Could be better

To offer is to allow for rejection, to give is to entrust, i think maybe this would be better for a proposal, but not as vows. Jim is right, you can offer anything, but you can only give so much. make a promise to GIVE the one you love these things, don't offer them, it comes off a weak-willed. sorry...

Amber 2010-09-10

almost perfect

it just needed a couple of things added to it but its almost perfect

shaela 2010-08-18

boring

it's just flat

laura 2010-07-05

Offering

If you are going to offer things it'd be better to say i offer you my love,my strenght, my etc etc.

Katie 2010-04-05

Ummmm.....

The only good thing I can say about this vow is that if you forgat your vows you could make it uo as you go and sound believable.

Hillary 2009-02-10

Lack of imagination...

All I see is "I"... I will do this, I will do that. I agree with Marilyn, the list could go on forever.

It's written by someone who with a lack of imagination and put all the clichés together with "I will give you... (add cliché here)"

Allie 2008-05-06

great

its so sweet but short.

April and Toby 2005-06-07