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I offer you my love Comments
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| Name: April and Toby | 2005-06-07 |
| its so sweet but short. |
| Lack of imagination... |
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| Name: Allie | 2008-05-06 |
All I see is "I"... I will do this, I will do that. I agree with Marilyn, the list could go on forever.
It's written by someone who with a lack of imagination and put all the clichés together with "I will give you... (add cliché here)" |
| Ummmm..... |
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| Name: Hillary | 2009-02-10 |
| The only good thing I can say about this vow is that if you forgat your vows you could make it uo as you go and sound believable. |
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| Name: Katie | 2010-04-05 |
| If you are going to offer things it'd be better to say i offer you my love,my strenght, my etc etc. |
| boring |
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| Name: laura | 2010-07-05 |
| it's just flat |
| almost perfect |
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| Name: shaela | 2010-08-18 |
| it just needed a couple of things added to it but its almost perfect |
| Could be better |
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| Name: Amber | 2010-09-10 |
| To offer is to allow for rejection, to give is to entrust, i think maybe this would be better for a proposal, but not as vows. Jim is right, you can offer anything, but you can only give so much. make a promise to GIVE the one you love these things, don't offer them, it comes off a weak-willed. sorry... |
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| Name: Jamie Hancock | 2011-10-24 |
| Not many people want to sit there at a wedding for hours to hear two people being gooshy about how much they love each other! This one I would pick because its better than "Do you? Do you? Now lets party!" which is my original choice |
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