I offer you my love

________, I offer you my love
I offer you my strength
I offer you my weaknesses
I offer you my support
I offer you my loyalty
I offer you my faith
For as long as we both shall live.


  • Love It

    Not many people want to sit there at a wedding for hours to hear two people being gooshy about how much they love each other! This one I would pick because its better than "Do you? Do you? Now lets party!" which is my original choice

    Jamie Hancock 2011-10-23

  • Could be better

    To offer is to allow for rejection, to give is to entrust, i think maybe this would be better for a proposal, but not as vows. Jim is right, you can offer anything, but you can only give so much. make a promise to GIVE the one you love these things, don't offer them, it comes off a weak-willed. sorry...

    Amber 2010-09-10

  • almost perfect

    it just needed a couple of things added to it but its almost perfect

    shaela 2010-08-18

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