________, I offer you my love
I offer you my strength
I offer you my weaknesses
I offer you my support
I offer you my loyalty
I offer you my faith
For as long as we both shall live.
Not many people want to sit there at a wedding for hours to hear two people being gooshy about how much they love each other! This one I would pick because its better than "Do you? Do you? Now lets party!" which is my original choice
Jamie Hancock
Could be better
To offer is to allow for rejection, to give is to entrust, i think maybe this would be better for a proposal, but not as vows. Jim is right, you can offer anything, but you can only give so much. make a promise to GIVE the one you love these things, don't offer them, it comes off a weak-willed. sorry...
Amber
almost perfect
it just needed a couple of things added to it but its almost perfect
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Not many people want to sit there at a wedding for hours to hear two people being gooshy about how much they love each other! This one I would pick because its better than "Do you? Do you? Now lets party!" which is my original choice
Jamie Hancock
Could be better
To offer is to allow for rejection, to give is to entrust, i think maybe this would be better for a proposal, but not as vows. Jim is right, you can offer anything, but you can only give so much. make a promise to GIVE the one you love these things, don't offer them, it comes off a weak-willed. sorry...
Amber
almost perfect
it just needed a couple of things added to it but its almost perfect
shaela
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