As we make one of two Comments

  • make oneof two

    fantastic non traditional vows .....

    ian 2012-03-09


  • vow

    I love this it is simple and to the point

    Pamela 2012-02-08


  • awwww

    this is really sweet

    elizabeth robinson 2011-11-15


  • LOVE IT

    It Was An Awsome Vow! I Love It And It Sounds So Nice :) tears tears of joy ...

    Tiffany 2011-10-11


  • LOVE

    I really love this. It is so beautiful. i plan to do a poem for my wedding

    Jen 2010-08-05


  • to long

    This would take forever

    Rachel 2009-03-01


  • absolutely beautiful

    this is so beautiful, just perfect.

    Jen 2008-10-31


  • i dont think so

    i agree with George... the whole rhyming thing makes a mockery of your solemn wedding vows...

    Amy 2008-09-16


  • Wow

    This is truly, truly beautiful.

    Claudia 2008-09-14


  • As we make one of two

    Not a fan of this one. It reminds me of a poem I wrote for a boy I liked in Junior High. Way too many "ooh" words too.

    Amy Lee 2008-06-14


  • together as one

    I think that this is absolutely beautiful. I got lost a few times when the rhythm seemed to break, but I love it! I think that I'd like to use this in my wedding. However, I would say relatively traditional vows and then say this together, as one, with my new husband!

    Morgan 2007-10-12


  • Dr Seuss wrote this

    I do not like it Sam I am. I will not eat green eggs and ham.

    George 2007-07-06


  • as we make one of two

    it is beautiful, but long.

    Savannah 2005-06-03


  • as we make one of two

    this is beautiful thank you for sharing this!!!

    sherrie 2005-04-29

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