if you have religious reservations, you can certainly edit it! that isn't hard to do....you want your vows to reflect your deeply personal love and commitment.
I adore this one!
tena2011-09-25
a bit overwrought
I feel a song coming on........
If you're a manic-depressive, this is your manic state.
Otherwise, it's perfect.
Autumn2010-08-19
cute
I think its sweet and very traditional, i like it!
crystal2009-06-12
Beautiful
I will be using most of this in a love letter to my husband celebrating 30yrs of marriage. It is exactly how I feel.
Charlotte2009-05-19
maybe not
Sorry but this one pushes some of my buttons.
1. "I worship you with my mind, body and soul" As a christian I do not "worship" ANYONE but God.
2. "I vow to always put you first in my life" While this phrase means well and on the surface is really sweet, you cannot confidently vow to put another body before your own ALL of the time, so this phrase sounds like a lie to me.
However I do like "How blessed I am to be able to say you are mine" but I would say "....to be able to say that you asked me to be yours" or something like that cos you're not quite "mine" NEARLY!!!! but not yet.
Can you tell I'm honest? :P
Ellen2009-03-28
wonderful
it is just what i wanted to say and how i wanted to say it.
Elizabeth2007-09-12
love it
i love this one. its my favorite.im going to use this one.
I will read this to my love
if you have religious reservations, you can certainly edit it! that isn't hard to do....you want your vows to reflect your deeply personal love and commitment.
I adore this one!
tena 2011-09-25
a bit overwrought
I feel a song coming on........
If you're a manic-depressive, this is your manic state.
Otherwise, it's perfect.
Autumn 2010-08-19
cute
I think its sweet and very traditional, i like it!
crystal 2009-06-12
Beautiful
I will be using most of this in a love letter to my husband celebrating 30yrs of marriage. It is exactly how I feel.
Charlotte 2009-05-19
maybe not
Sorry but this one pushes some of my buttons.
1. "I worship you with my mind, body and soul" As a christian I do not "worship" ANYONE but God.
2. "I vow to always put you first in my life" While this phrase means well and on the surface is really sweet, you cannot confidently vow to put another body before your own ALL of the time, so this phrase sounds like a lie to me.
However I do like "How blessed I am to be able to say you are mine" but I would say "....to be able to say that you asked me to be yours" or something like that cos you're not quite "mine" NEARLY!!!! but not yet.
Can you tell I'm honest? :P
Ellen 2009-03-28
wonderful
it is just what i wanted to say and how i wanted to say it.
Elizabeth 2007-09-12
love it
i love this one. its my favorite.im going to use this one.
karen 2007-09-04
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