These vows are beautiful, heartwarming and would have loved to hear my husband say these words to me. The only issue is how much there is to read.
Dyna2022-09-05
Don’t Write A Book
This is far too long to be a vow. Writing a letter to give someone another time is fine but you have gone into too many details. Vows are light and loving. Not dark and depressing.
Loo2020-05-11
I have to beg to differ.
I honestly feel, that from a personal perspective, and some that has struggled with depression myself that it does play a huge role in the person you become. If someone feels that type of way, then why not share? Nobody should have to feel alone or embarrassed when it comes down to how they feel. You have the right to say that you would feel embarrassed, although the author of these vows obviously would not.. I do have to say, though. The positioning of the words seem as if the author had not checked for grammatical errors. It has a beautiful way of expressing deep feelings, although I personally feel there are too many details crammed into one thought. I see this as a rough draft for a wedding how, though I would definitely make corrections! Otherwise, like I said its a start!
Renee2015-08-20
ahhhhhhhhhhhh....ahhhh
This person is severely depressed. I would be embarrassed to say that to anyone.
Two commentors need to get over themselves.
These vows are beautiful, heartwarming and would have loved to hear my husband say these words to me. The only issue is how much there is to read.
Dyna 2022-09-05
Don’t Write A Book
This is far too long to be a vow. Writing a letter to give someone another time is fine but you have gone into too many details. Vows are light and loving. Not dark and depressing.
Loo 2020-05-11
I have to beg to differ.
I honestly feel, that from a personal perspective, and some that has struggled with depression myself that it does play a huge role in the person you become. If someone feels that type of way, then why not share? Nobody should have to feel alone or embarrassed when it comes down to how they feel. You have the right to say that you would feel embarrassed, although the author of these vows obviously would not.. I do have to say, though. The positioning of the words seem as if the author had not checked for grammatical errors. It has a beautiful way of expressing deep feelings, although I personally feel there are too many details crammed into one thought. I see this as a rough draft for a wedding how, though I would definitely make corrections! Otherwise, like I said its a start!
Renee 2015-08-20
ahhhhhhhhhhhh....ahhhh
This person is severely depressed. I would be embarrassed to say that to anyone.
ahhhhhh 2014-08-08
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