Holding Hands Comments

  • Reverend

    I love most of this, but as I am marrying a couple In their 40’s I will have to take a few things out.

    Edna Huff 2020-05-13

  • My wedding vows

    When I turn 100 years we will get married. At
    My. Church.

    Sairah. Garner 2019-01-16

  • Love this!

    My fiance and I live a very traditional life style so this fits us perfectly! I love this so much! We are also doing a knot tying ceremony and I think all it will come together beautifully! Thank you!

    Whitney 2017-04-21

  • Rings

    I love this and will have to edit some but how should I add in the exchange of rings?

    Billiejo 2016-04-16

  • love this.

    I modified this a little to fit my fiance and me more. After I took a few things out he loved it. I'm excited about adding this into our ceremony.

    Katelyn 2015-04-20

  • Incredible

    I have always wanted to do a personalized Vow, but reading this I have a feeling I want to do both-! This was so incredible and very special to me I would have to tweak a little(because I'm going to adopt children!) but it will be very special and Magical~!!!! Thank you.

    Rachael Gratehouse 2015-01-09

  • just change it a bit

    I think this is a good base for a nice vow if you plan to write your own. Although I agree it's pretty old fashioned sexist & too much about giving birth. But cut out some lines & make it more like a WE thing instead of a HIM & HER thing...I think it would be very useful :) I'm just lookin for ideas to write my own, so thanks.

    person 2014-05-27

  • redic


    is this the begining of some steamy novel or what, "his large strong hands" ha!

    haha 2013-08-11

  • Beautiful

    I think these vows are very beautiful; I find nothing sexist about them. (If you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all.)

    Jackie 2012-08-25

  • yup

    i am so going to use this one... i love it...

    dee 2012-08-14

  • So Beautiful

    I want these words to be said on my wedding day. These are my vows :)

    Rosalie Jasmine 2012-07-16

  • Oh my word.

    I burst into tears when I read this. My husband and I are coming up on our 1st anniversary, we never had a wedding and we're doing a very non-traditional renewing of vows. I don't think I'll use all of this, but it's very powerful.

    The wife 2012-04-19


    I like A LOT! Very creative!

    Natausha 2012-04-17

  • I agree

    I agee with wow, unbelievably sexist!

    Rhi 2012-03-12

  • Not really sexist...

    The only thing I saw that was potentially sexist was that it basically says the man will work and the woman raise the kids... Some people want that life, that doesn't make it sexist at all.

    ceecee 2012-03-03

  • love it

    i really loved this one, so did my fiance!! We are more than likely going to use this in our wedding along with our own written vows when we get married in july this summer!! this was great it just seemed to match us and sounded to fit us very well, touched my heart! thanks for the help!!!!!!!!!!

    alicia 2012-02-21

  • wow is right

    Completely sexist.

    varina 2012-02-21

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