This is a beautiful poem and has given me ideas for my own promises to my wife. Thank you.
Good but not Great
Love the idea and a lot of the words but the whole thing just doesn't have a great flow to it.
this is a absolute perfect wedding vow by Paul Grignon. I may have to borrow this. This best describes our love for each other, our passion for the outdoors, and the smooth flowing poetic poerty that we love.
I can relate to this and may borrow from it.