Harmony in our marriage Comments

  • my best friends wedding

    My closest girlfriend send this to me and as I began to read this, I envisioned her and all of her beautiful characteristics. As I continued to read I thought of them together and smiled, concurring with the intoxicating words I read. As I finished I actually had tears in my eyes for what I read was absolutely beautiful and didn't realize how much I yearned for this beauty myself... congratulations to a beautiful pair! What a beautiful blessing...

    krissy 2014-10-29

  • unrealistic

    As romantic as they sound, this is a completely unrealistic view of marriage.

    hdmt 2014-07-17

  • sweet

    Thanks, I needed this for this Friday

    Mark 2013-04-22

  • justice

    Simply perfect.

    Vanessa 2012-05-16

  • degrading

    This is degrading to women or men because it should be an equal marriage

    amanda 2011-03-24

  • Amen

    This is a portrait of a biblical marriage.

    Bob 2010-07-22

  • love it

    I think its beautiful and heartfelt and not at all cheesy

    kristin 2010-06-12

  • Awesome

    I love this so much.

    Sam O. 2010-03-30

  • I love this

    This is so beautiful.... I love it. I'm just afraid I'd be struck down with lightning if I said these in church. Quiet and gentle spirit? Not really me.

    Lovely vows, though!!! :)

    Jen 2009-06-17

  • i dont think so

    seeking to meet your every need I think not! He has to do some things for himself.

    Micki t 2009-03-03

  • beautiful

    i love this statement and i plan to use this for my marriage in my second block class

    princess 2008-09-11

  • Gentle

    I think this could have been worded a bit better, but I do love the part about striving for harmony with a quiet and gentle spirit.

    Jenna 2008-08-05

  • I like this very much

    This works very well. I love it's simplicity and directness. This is what i think makes a good marriage.

    Andrew 2008-07-27

  • good words

    Caroline, wedding vows aren't supposed to be poems. It doesn't matter how it sounds as much as it matters what you say.

    Andrew 2008-06-17

  • eHarmony

    we met on eHarmony, we'll be incorporating this into our June 6 wedding! (cuz it says harmony in it!)

    Taylor 2008-06-01

  • lame

    Vowing to desire to strive to try is a little to wishy washy. Let's have something more definitive in vows! Otherwise, why get everyone together to hear about some half-assed suggestion of a promise?

    penelope 2007-08-08

  • Err...

    Caroline, it isn't a poem, it's a vow. Do you want your vows to rhyme?!

    Leyla 2007-06-23

  • Sweet

    Short and sweet.

    Cynthia 2007-06-08

  • love it

    a beautiful statement of how a marriage should work.

    shirree 2005-05-01

  • This is me

    This has me written all over it! I think that I will use this at my wedding.

    David P. 2005-03-28

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