I ask you to share this world with me Comments

  • like more

    I really like how it sounds, i feel like i was beginning to be moved and suddenly it stopped. i would like it better it if there was more

    Tasha 2012-11-22

  • Disagreement

    I disagree that this poem is conditional. It talks about equality in the relationship. It isn't my favorite, but it is nice.

    Trisha 2009-09-29

  • uhmmm...

    i dont really like this me personally wouldnt use it ass my final vow!!!rate it - 0

    mariie 2009-02-05

  • Wow

    it's a good one.

    Sharmae 2008-11-02

  • Eeehhh

    It dosent flow. Not my favorite

    Haelyi 2007-07-30

  • Love It

    Just the way it starts is nice, Respect.

    Chelsea 2007-06-16

  • nope

    This poem sounds like "I'll only love you on condition that you love me more."

    Zelda 2007-05-18

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