I ask you to share this world with me

Respecting each other, we commit to live our lives
together for all the days to come.
I ask you to share this world with me, for good and ill.
Be my partner, and I will be yours.


  • like more

    I really like how it sounds, i feel like i was beginning to be moved and suddenly it stopped. i would like it better it if there was more

    Tasha 2012-11-22

  • Disagreement

    I disagree that this poem is conditional. It talks about equality in the relationship. It isn't my favorite, but it is nice.

    Trisha 2009-09-29

  • uhmmm...

    i dont really like this me personally wouldnt use it ass my final vow!!!rate it - 0

    mariie 2009-02-05

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