This Offering

I ________, offer you ________, on this day, an open Hand, Heart, and Soul, in which I carry with me through out each day. I offer unto you a place in these so that you are with me as well. With this offering I promise to Love, Cherish, and Respect you in every which way. To be Honest and Faithful for all our days. And would rather have this with no one other than You..... To represent this offering, I have this .....( give the ring )..... An endless circle of Love, Happiness, and only Joyful tears. I Love You so very much, as i will always..... Will you accept This Offering, for all I ask is the same in return?

By Toby Edenfield

3 Comments

  • almost perfect

    With the changing/rearranging of a few words, these vows will totally encompass my feelings for my fiance and give them my own personal touch :)

    Amy Murray 2012-05-23


  • so romantic it gave me goosebumps

    I think after looking at so very many..this is the one I choose. many are beautiful, but isn't the love of marriage the highest romance?

    tena 2011-09-25


  • Toby Wedding Vow

    I think the vow is beautiful although it is a bit
    extravagant. Just a bit though

    Judy Gilder 2005-08-30


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