These things I promise I will do

________, these things I promise I will do That life may grant you ample grace Because I love and cherish you: I vow to treasure what is true That I might touch whom I embrace: These things I promise I will do. I'll build a garden in your view that with sweet fruit will stone replace because I love and cherish you. I vow to love each day anew, for love must dance through time and space: These things I promise I will do. I vow to make your terrors few and then with you those demons face because I love and cherish you. And now, as we make one of two, a passage we cannot retrace, these things I promise I will do because I love and cherish you.

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  • I Like It

    The punctuation distracts and breaks up what is being said. If you get it lined out right and listen to what is being said, the sentiment is beautiful. A poetic heart speaks without regard to punctuation--

    Alyssa 2012-07-01


  • ha this is rediculous

    Really?? If my husband has demons im gonna run for the hills and hope he doesnt follow... I want vows that are going to talk about growing old together and falling in love all over again when dealing with life on lifes terms isnt going easy and to learn to live as one and to be faithful in a society that says sleeping around is ok... I just dont know how to word it other than ill love you when you start sagging and i wont be a slut lol not very good termonology but atleast its real

    dena 2012-03-19


  • soon to marry

    They are ridiculous vows. Something out of Harry Potter and the bridal horrors!!! Complete BS

    Tanya Banks 2012-01-28


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